Exilium

Name: Exilium

Element(s): Space

Cost: 10

Description: Doesn't really have a physical appearance.

Effect: A wave of Space-source bursts from Shirou's body in an instant, sending everybody within a five feet radius of him back ten feet, at moderate speeds, if uninterrupted. This does no physical harm, and only serves to knock foes surrounding him off their feet, giving him a chance to either counter or escape. Primarily affects average humanoid/creatures/conducts, not affecting small projectiles or massive conducts.

You say anybody, but does this spell affect things like summons such as large, heavy summons? And does it affect only the first target it hits or multiple within the range?

Everybody within range, and affects anything under 400lbs.

You'll need to say to feet if uninterrupted.

For five source to move every object under four hundred pounds within five feet of you ten feet would be fairly more expensive than this. Raise the cost to what you feel is fair and we'll go about it from there.

Edited the general description, to be more specific and raised the cost.

Raise the cost to 15

Anything I can change so I don't have to?

Lower the weight to 225 lbs.

The 300lbs mark is so that basically any human or humanoid creature is affected, and there's no need to argue for specifics. Most people don't state their weight in their character app, so somebody can say, "My character just happens to be 226lbs, durr."

Then why did you include a weight in the first place? As soon as it drops below what you wanted, you tried to argue a what if with me. Why don't you just say "affects average humanoid targets"? That leaves room for the bulky/fat/short/tall crowd to be affected and leaves giant, huge summons out of the effect.

I included the weight because you wanted me to explain how it affected heavy-weights? I apologize if I changed it in a way you disagreed with, but you didn't give a specific direction to go towards.

Edited.

Approved